Dear, you managed to write a romantic crime story without even breaking ROBSTAR off character and keeping them perfectly perfect! This might as well come in a with popcorn and a movie ticket. Romantic Crime stories are the best. PERFECT 10! :DDDDD Continue writing. You have a gift!

so... the legend... did the woman's husband swing himself or was it just one-sided by the man?

...sowwy, I just... wanted to know... '

anyway, really nicely written, I love the details you put in and your writing style, and yes, this ending was better.

I mean... if you made Kory into a ghost... and it was 1pm now... I would have cried... I'm serious, I would have cried.

So... good story and I like the ending... just one more thing... is Richard going to ask her dead father for permission to marry her or just ignore her father... and ask her mother instead?

Ooohh myyy goooood! I'm in love with your story! and i love happy enddings!wwwwooahhhh haha

This was so amazing! I enjoyed every single second of it. I loved the idea of Marty's unique way of killing, kinda reminds me of the movie "Seven" where the guy killed people according to the 7 sins. I think as soon as I found out it was princesses, I automatically thought of Ariel for Kory. I actually did think it was Brandon who was behind all the murders, you did an awesome job with that! Making the reader think something else that is. Over all this amazing!

Wonderful history, I'm happy you didn't kill her off in the end, Bruce was part of the funny and the idea of the criminal Fairytale is really impressive, you had a lot of creativity and did very well. Keep writing stories about the TT, you're a very talented writer.

WOW, great TT story! Even if it was AU. First I just have to say, "Nah. It's the release of those vampire romance novels. If they ask you which team you're on, back away slowly." Kory eyed the people like one would a hungry mountain lion- is the FUNNIEST thing I have ever read. And sadly enough, I AM a Twilight fan, what can I say? But it was funny all the same. Anyway, this was a great story, and the Fairytale Felon was such an amazing idea! How did you come up with something like that? It as beyond clever. I'm happy to know tha TT are still being written and that I shouldn't lose hope in them yet. You're a wonderful author, and this story was perfect. Perhaps another one? Not AU though?

Think about it,

escaperealityforawhile

Absolutely wonderful story! I'm glad you didn't kill her off in the end and was hoping that you were just leading us on again like in one of your earlier chapters. Please continue writing and never stop!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww )

Aww, the beginning made me start crying, and the part about Bruce being like the dude from legend made me laugh. I love this story!

whoa you had me scared that kory didn't survive. lol thank god she's not. a great ending to a great story. good job & keep up the hard work.

This was such a perfect ending! I enjoyed reading this story and I hope you write more Richard/Kory stories!

Thank you for the dedication and the birthday wishes and the wonderful ending! The chapter was absolutely beautiful (and funny - loved the Bruce dig!) and well written as always.

Overall, one of the best fics I've read. Best of luck in school. Stay in touch! Hopefully you'll have some time to write during the semester, if not, over the breaks.

Thank you for sharing your imagination and talents with all of us!

LJ

You made me cry :( ...so great job! I love this story so plz plz dont let Kory die plzzzzzzz!

omgeezzzzzzzzzzzzz! it is so good! i feel like crying right now!please don't let her die, i hate it when one of the main characters die! (Though do not wory i will still love your story even if she does die.)

As usual a wonderful chapter. The emotions, the action and even the drowning were well described. Yes, you caught the subtleties of the drowning process.

I could say the dying process as to what we observe clinical because I've been there more times than I could count, I really hope it's not - I really hope Kory survives of course, but I know you don't shy away from such things in your stories.

I do have a birthday coming up however, and I would love a happy ending for this incarnation of Dick and Kory.

Again, a terrific job as always!

LJ