I am liking this one. For some reason towards the end, I was smiling, but I have no idea why. This is going to be an emotional one I can feel it because I know I will probably start to cry once there is an update that causes it. Can't wait for an update. Great job. :)

I like that they are cousins of Tony. :)

keep up the great work

Like what I have read so far. Hope you continue the story and update soon.

Very good but question on the kids ages -

are the twins seven or ten if one is 7 one is 10 they are simply brother and sister.

update soon- make that very very soon

Wow, off to an interesting start. Two things: Two twins is redundant, since twins means "two ones." And I think Deante and Dante are too similar. It could be confusing. Unless you meant it to be?