A great crossover that has feel of the original works. You have done an awesome job!

I noticed in the court proceedings you mentioned the year was 2001. However in HP cannon Harry entered Hogwarts in 1991 as he was born in 1980. Obviously this is an au of sorts so you are free to change that but I thought I would point it out.

I really hope you continue to update this story. It's probably the best HP/Alice crossover I've ever read.

I had completely forgotten about Hatter's worry to be honest. This is brilliant.

I love this story so muvh! I love how you've so successfully woven together Harry Potter and Alice, as well as the other small references like the Addams Family and Primeval. It makes mr so happy :) Please update!

Aww, so of course when I read it it stops on a sad note. T_T Looking forwards to more, and I hope they patch things up soon! And that Remus doesn't do something stupid and tear the family apart further.

And more of the Addams!

Please update soon - just realized it's been a while.

"Mr. Addams, or Gomez" I KNEW IT! Iknewit,Iknewit,Iknewit! Whoo!

And the Wonka references were a nice touch too! Gotta get back to reading, but had to express my glee of you actually managing to work the Addams Family into this!

AHHHHHH where did you go? I tell you what I never thought this crossover would work and then I started reading your world and now I cant figure out why I would ever think that! Seriously you blended them so nicely! But now you must finish...please, even if it is just your thoughts in bullet form. Just knowing where it was going to end up would be nice. Well that's my plea. /

cant say i guessed it exactly, but i wasn't surprised by it. brilliant story, i can't wait to read more! please update asap, in the meantime i wish you good luck and no writers block in this and all of your future writings. good luck!

p.s. love the chapter titles! i've written quite a few of them down to remember :)

More, please? :)

Hey - rereading for the halibut, realized that at one point in this chapter you put "atter focused on the next task ahead of them that he'd been both curious about and dreading as Alice and Harry debated plans for Sunday; the trip to Hogwarts."

But then later, when they're AT Hogwarts, classes are in session...'"It would be prudent to wait for classes to being before we start a tour of the grounds," the Professor commented' Classes on Sunday?

Just a note, in case you decide to re-edit.

Cheers, CK

PS: Doctor & Rose arrived today. TOO CUTE! My friend will love them, I'm sure.

more please.

I've spent a good portion of today reading this story and its prequel and I have to say that I think that they are absolutely wonderful and I can't wai to see where you take it from here. I noticed that it has been a while since a new chapter has been posted and I hope that you haven't run out of inspiration or time to write. Please keep up the fantastic work and I hope to see more in the near future...I am willing to beg?

Oi. Poke. Poke. Two months?

Just thought of something: If in a matter of days, Alice picked up enough magic to enhance her reflexes, why can't Robert have picked up enough magic to make potions? There's no foolish wand waving there ;). My pet theory, especially after the Merope Gaunt story, is that one must have magic to make potions - it's not inherent in the plant material, it's the handling by someone magic that makes the magical qualities of the plants come out. So perhaps Robert, with his background involving Chemistry, might actually make for a talented Potioneer, if he's picked up enough magic to trigger the plant qualities?

Or is that where you were already going with the idea of Robert helping Sirius? :D

Anyway, I know you're getting ready for a wedding and all, but throw us a bone here! And don't forget I'm happy to beta-read anything.

Cheers,

CK

An excellent sequel. I do think you're laying the Alice/Hatter arguements on a bit thick but that's probably just me comparing their relationships to the far less realistic and more fluffy romances prevalent in fan fics... So I guess that's actually a plus.

Excellent twists, though I do wonder what you're going to do when/if Harry goes to Hogwarts... He's not the most social kid is he?

Another thing this story has me pondering is, what is the goal? The over-arching plot that ties things together? Canon had Voldy and the Queen respectively but now that you've toppled the Queen are you going to move on to Voldemort?

Great story, I hope to see more soon,

-Twy