its to bad they didn't end up together...
it would have been perfect.
i gues jkr didn't want to pair off all the couples in the books, and bring in some other ones
...
that made no sense whatsoever.

i think parviti was a bit harsh,
when you fall in love - it isn't conditional.
the ending was so sad...

aawwwwwwwwwwww
you is now my favourite fanfiction author EVER!
*sobs quietly in awe of the sweetness*

so thats where she got the idea from!
So zacharias isn't to bad after all...

this is so good :) :) :) :) :)
i really have no words for this, its just ... so sweeeeeeet :) 3

Ah, I always like reading about Theo Nott. This is a nice piece, and I really like the ending, since it's not a predictable, perfectly happy ending but instead a bit melancholy so it sticks with you.

(Also, I have to say that I like that Death Cab for Cutie song you chose :)

5/5 It's a very sweet and lovely entry! I love it. Percy is in-character and likeable, your Penelope is sweet and perfect for Percy, I loved your characterisation. Ginny is so funny in this, it's only a small appearance, yet, she's truly vivid. It's an adorable fic, great job!

*giggles* This was really nice. I love how you developed both characters and showed a different side of Percy while remaining IC. I like how the confesses how he missed her, and how his little sister being "hurt" messed with him. I thought Ginny was hilarious here too. Very annoying-little-sister.

I really like this one. Well done!

You have no idea how much I love this!

It's adorable and very well written. Penelope is so believable and the pairing is just plain cute.

Ack! Well done!

I am very jealous that you and your talents are in Hufflepuff!

Very nice, very sweet. Keep updating and go Hufflepuff!

4/5 It's a beautiful summer love story. But with more depth because they are in war. And because they meet again, and it's all bittersweet. I loved it, and the way you ended it, with that last sentence, is perfect. Even if it's in the word account, it feels a little rushed and apart from Theo, the characterisations are a little flat. But I really like the atmosphere you created and how it fits the prompt. Great job!

This is absolutely wonderful.

And I've kinda fallen out of love with TeddyLily recently, but you've made me remember exactly what I adored about it.

Your prompt usage was natural and excellently managed - they just meshed right into the flow of the story.

Also, your writing style in this is absolutely stunning. The flow is perfect and the tone is so conflicted - sweet and conflicted and forbidden.

Oh, I really think this is my favorite entry of yours by far.

Really amazing job. :)

Beautifully written and I love the way he's not exactly good, but not bad either. Keep updating and go Hufflepuff!

4/5 It's a very beautiful and moving story. I love the fact that Frank is trapped in his own head and he relives his memories all days long. I like the beginning and the ending, but the romance part seems a little quick. I do know that it's Frank memories and that's why they are disconnected, except that for the reader it's a little hard to follow their progression. It's not rushed, you do build the story, but it misses key moments in my opinion. However you have a great fic, I loved it!

I just read all your entries and this is by far my favourite. I love the way you have described the memories and the way you have pictures them as a couple throughout the ytears. The last bit, where Neville tells them he has avenged them, was very emotional. The fact Frank spoke his son's name while he was already gone gave me a chill down my back...