Nice story to a nice quote, love it

It's so sweet...

Very sweet... I love the showing of vulnerability. Just as we would have loved to see in the series.

Cute! I liked it.

Wonderful! Very sweet and passionate.

Nice, with an easy flow from one line to another. You lightly touched on each subject without wearing it out. You show a lot of promise.

I have only one negative comment, your spelling is terrible. It was so bad I had to keep going over the sentence to try to figure out what you had meant to say. Don't give up, keep trying. I will look forward to reading any new stories you have.

Good story...but your spell checker has a cold and glitched a few times!