| Reviews for I'll Always Be There |
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Maxine 11/4/12 . chapter 3 Please make more chapters! I love Spectacular! and Nikko and Courtney! |
Project alpha BBB 9/25/12 . chapter 3Have Nikko be some kind of super spy! No I'm just playing, though that'd be cool. But not sureal. Like something I would do. This is kinda good so far. But for the idea, you kinda lucked out. This was a good idea none the less and since you have it already uploaded and such GREAT reviews you shouldn't change it. What i would suggest and what I WOULD do, have Nikko come, armed with maybe a knife. Make sure he gets in and out. With Courtney, maybe let the guy give him a souveneir. Make sure Nikko recognizes him, or gets a glimpse as he leaves and maybe a cut in the arm/ cheek. That's what my dad says makes a good story/ movie good guy bad guy come, see each other small fight then something happens and one has to leave. Then involve Tajid, Caspian, Robin, Janet, and Courtney (of course) give alittle back story of Nikko, oh and Stavros (have him in it too) and maybe a sister or mother that's a police officer and Nikko and Stavros had to walk out on them because... of something. That's not all I got but I'll let you come up with the rest. Any questions come and ask I don't mind. THIS WAS A GREAT IDEA none the less. I've been thinking of doing something like this for at least two days, most 1 week. CONTINUE |
GAKUENALICEROCKS 9/15/12 . chapter 3PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! |
channyobsessedoct2 7/8/12 . chapter 3Please update I'm out of fresh ideas tho sorry |
riceandchopstixs 6/26/11 . chapter 2I really am liking this. Are you going to continue? (no pressure) |
Isob3l 5/8/11 . chapter 1Ooh! I love this! Please update soon! |
Isob3l 4/26/11 . chapter 2Dude... you should update. Its really good! |
soccergurl31294 12/19/10 . chapter 2Gr8 chapter & story! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Cougirl 8/26/10 . chapter 2i love this story so far. i cant wait to read what happens next. keep working on it! |
youknowitsmsrae 8/7/10 . chapter 1UPDATE PLEASE! I'm loving it! |
xxcoltsfan18xx 7/5/10 . chapter 1more! |
NotSoSweetAndInnocentAnymore 7/3/10 . chapter 1luz it |
IheartPRSamuraiJayden 7/1/10 . chapter 1oh my goodness! this looks like a really good story! you definitely have to continue it! :) |