|Reviews for July 1st|
| speadee 2/1/12 . chapter 1
Good job on the feelings and surprise! I'm glad Canada was noticed and remembered.
I didn't know Australia had trouble hearing. How did he end up traveling with America, England, France, and Sealand? I thought Sealand would have come with Sweden and Finland. Why would Egypt be in Germany's car? I didn't think he talked much with Germany, the Italy brothers, or Spain.
It is like Prussia to play pranks and do mean things. I didn't know Kumajirou knew how to shop. How did he remain in America's box for such a long time without getting hot and restless?
It said, "The presents were opened, and most of the nations had left to go back home." Doesn't that include America's present? That would mean that Kumajirou would have been released before the others went home. Why did Canada put that one present in his closet?
It is like America to have such an elaborate party.
| xTrateltx 7/20/10 . chapter 1
First review, oh yeah. :DD
This is a really sweet story ;w; Everyone in the story seems to be right in character, and the plot is very "awww" inducing I have no idea how to say how much I appreciate this, as I don't write reviews very often xD;; But! You must know that I love this story a lot
Fave'd for sure -