Love this story ] Cant wait to read more.

Sorry about your breakup..I know it might be weird hearing this from a complete stranger, and I'm sorry if it makes you feel as though I'm intruding or anything. I hope things get better for you.

awwww. cute. Please update soon. I Love it :)

LOVING THIS.

Please continue :)

Damn, these chapters are so short, but so good. This is now my OTP, haha. Fairly certain I've exhausted the entire fandom's, sadly small, cache of River/Amy fics. Totally looking forward to whatever more you write for this, or any oneshots you write :)

I really laughed trying to imagine the Doctor's face when he saw River and Amy doing... stuff, hahahaha.

But all that part with the Doctor talking about Rose... was so beautiful and sad.

Great chapter. :D

You just dragged Rose in.

You broke the holy code of Moffat and dragged Rose in.

That means you HAVE to mention and/or include RTD-era plot in this story. Right? Please? :D

11/Rose River/Amy? /grins/ Amy/Rose?

/shrugs/ Oh, ignore me, I'm going all fangirl...

Adorable. Poor Doctor, poor Roranicus, etc.

Aww, the whole speech about the Doctor and his beloved Rose was heartbreaking. I could really feel the Doctor's pain, the poor guy. :)

Though to be honest, I agree with what the Doctor said. I think he'll refuse to marry River because of his love for Rose. And in this fiction, River's love for Amy! :D

You're doing great and I hope you're feeling better. :3

"...is the best*** thing ever! :D"

That's what happens when it's 3 a.m. and you're totally falling over the keyboard, haha. Sorry.

This chapter was breathtaking.

And I'm totally in love with this fanfiction, so pleeeease, if you could update it soon... *-*

And well, fight!sex is the better thing ever! :D

Oh wow...:P To fighting to having sex with one another? Yeah. I'm really liking this fiction. XD But whoaaa! River really cannot control herself around Amy, no? x) I'm still wondering what will happen with the whole Doctor/River situation. But hey, I'm not complaining. Excellent chapter.

o.O Oh River, so cold! Though I'm sure I understand her actions somewhat. Maybe she misunderstood what Amy was feeling and is taking it harshly? Sure seems like it. :P Oh but I'm excited again, can't wait for your next update!

ANITA!

Oh...

T.T

:D Lovely chapter.

Oh that was so cool. ) I feel like such a school girl but I squealed when the whole 'Mercy' scenario came up. The Big Bang reference? :P Loving it.

And Amy/River! Finally! River made a move though I think everyone was pretty sure she wanted to do so anyway.

But d'aww...I feel sorry for poor Amy [ She has these new, exciting feelings for River but she can't even remember her first kiss. Do I detect angst? :D

Help her out River! :D

LOVE the Big Bang parallel. Adorable. Hilarious. Brilliant. Interesting. /hums/ Either she plum forgot, or maybe the person was erased from time if you choose to mess with that little arc.

:D Oops. Collar... Right... That's either not good, or it's hilarious and will result in nothing more than a tiny shock or something... :) Whichever.

Love this :D Love alpha!river and what more its got a seemingly solid plot to back it all up, awesome! More soon plz x