yay! new chapter! (well, it's been there for some weeks now - sorry for not seeing it earlier...)

Lukas' feelings are very clearly expressed, thanks to your nice writing - hope he'll soon find a solution to how comfort Brett (I'm sure some of us could give him a hint *snicker*)

I'm adding your story to my alert list, that way it won't take me 2 months to see it updated.

take care!

Wow, I'd almost forgotten about this one! Thankfully, you've gotten back to it and it's as great as ever. Love the angst. Looooove it.

hey hey! when will Brett see that there is no future with Andie - especially when there's Lukas who needs a hand?

Nice - let's hope for more interaction with these two, and also that Brett doesn't do anything stupid.

keep it up

hey, just noticed that you continued this - happy! :)

it's amazing how so much gets through with so little words

i like how the two of them are turning around each other - *sigh* we'll just have to wait and see

thanks again

Awe. Sad. I thhink yous hould update and maybe make the chapters longer.

Awe, how rude of Lukas. I sorta like Andie, thought Charlie is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAY better. ;D

Again, it is good. It's short. Seems to me like you are trying to capture little things in a small paragraph.

Good start, short, but good. :)

it! I always wondered what Brett was thinking when Lukas was shot . . . update soon!

Short & sweet - I emphasize on the sweet. I love how you ended this chapter/paragraph (whatever you want to call it) "Lukas wishes Brett could see how Andie is all wrong for him. And how right for him Lukas is." Gold, I tell you . . .

Hahaha! I Love it. Seriously I was cracking up at the very beginning. I honestly can't say I really care for Andie's character, and I can totally see where and why there would be a Lukas/Brett slash. There just seems to be so much tension there.

I really like this so far, I hope that you update soon! :)

I like how you add wolfish details to this one, like the fact that she'd smell "off." Good choice! Plus, I can imagine Lukas feeling this way, that Brett is his.

This is cute. I'm not typically a fan of slash but I still liked it all the same. Kudos.

AW! Tis sad and cute at the SAME TIME. O_o I just started watching the show, so I came on here looking for some SLASH. Unfortunately, this is the only one so far. TT Thank goodness it's a good one! Hehe, I like Lukas and Brett together. :D Tis super cute!

Aww. This is so perfect for them.

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