This story was amazing. I loved every part of it. It was interesting, cute, funny. Just yay! Thank you for writing this!

Amazing story, Loved it! Plz wright more chapters!

your really good, keep it up.

I love the way it goes from humorous to almost depressing at the end, with Naruto admitting his feelings and Sai questioning how long he can keep Naruto's attention.

SaiNaru is cute! :D

I like the flow of the story, and I also love your character (so uniquely them). I think you opened one exciting can of whoopass when Naruto admitted he loves Sasuke and Sai going with it anyways. I would love to see this extend into more NaruSai specific.

Hi! I just read your story and I have to say I really liked it. Your writing kind of even reminds me of my own writing. You portray the characters similarly to how I would portray the characters, myself.

The characters in here are pretty on target, I enjoy that. The only thing I have to say is that it was a little abrupt. But, that's okay! It's okay because it was a nice, short piece and maybe sometime you could try doing another SaiNaru/NaruSai piece that is longer because this was really fantastic!

I like this pairing, because whenever i watch or read Naruto i can see this one-sided thing with Sai.

I don't know maybe i'm reading too much into it.

Anyway that doesn't really have anything to do with the story. The begining of this story is pretty good so far, i'm wondering how this whole thing will turn out.

So i'm gonna wait to find out what happens next. XD

I like this fandom about NaruSai, to tell you the truth, I thought that Naruto was starting to love Sai because he said that he couldn't get it out of his head.

Lovely story, like the rest.

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Well, that was very interesting, and very believable! Sai's great in this fic, smart, blunt, and caring-in-his-oh-so-very-strange-way, I really enjoyed reading him. Thank you for writing!)))

It was all nice - up to the last part. You are right, the ending IS abrupt.

All those little intermezzos with Sakura and Kiba are fun, the scene in the library is okay too but what I am personally missing is what made Naruto snap in that way and why did Sai go with it even though he had already refused Naruto...

You were so nicely going with "show, don't tell" more or less the whole story - except for the ending. I also miss there more descriptions of what are they thinking. Wait, that's not a good formulation... More like I don't see their emotions in the description, I cannot imagine what is going on, if Naruto is desperate, confused, faltering, lusting after Sai, broken because of Sasuke... I think that's what is the main factor in creating that abrupt feeling...

Thanks for bearing with my review ;-)