hey, this is a brilliant fiction. I really like it :D

Absolutely amazing! Thank you! :)

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Sorry, short review, on iphone: just wanted to say, I avoided this fic forever, b/c the title made it seem it'd be a silly fluffy fic, not very good. That could not be more wrong - it was *so* worth the read. Well done!

really good, love the way it's structured... Oh Peeta the ladies man :) check out my Story if you want

This is a very nice story so far and I really like it. I love all of the humor you added, and I also wanted to say that I am glad all of the chapters are long, because that's the way I like them.
Also, I actually don't think that any of the chapters had enough bad language to permit them being rated M. Swearing is alright with the Teen rating, because I'm sure teens know how to handle it. A few swears (from a temperamental guy, after all) are completely acceptable. I really liked this story though, and I hope you will keep writing (not necessarily fan fiction). -Eadin

Wow...just wow, amazing story. So well written and paced that I felt I was reading a real book! Loved the characters and It has made me love Peeta even more than I did before! Favourite Hunger Games fanfiction by far and sad to have finished reading it, I would have loved a sequel, I actually crave for it now! Well done and thanks for writing!

Absolutely beautiful xx

What a wonderful story! You have great pacing and kept Peeta and katniss very true to their character. Thanks for sharing!

Okay, you have a ton of reviews for this story (which it deserves well), but I have to say, this is one of THE best stories I have ever read- and not just for fanfiction. What I love about this story is that it really makes me wish that the reapings didn't have to happen. In the original books we're treated to one chapter of hasty exposition before Prim gets chosen, Katniss volunteers, and then Peeta gets chosen as well. Not that the books themselves aren't great, but at that point we didn't really feel for the characters. This story really makes you feel for the characters, and that's something pretty rare.
I also loved how it isn't easy for Peeta, and he's not a suave guy who gets girls easily. He has to work to win Katniss's love, and even then he has to work to maintain it.
I have rambled myself out, but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story. 116,000 words, and I read it in a little over an hour- it's that great!

This was amazing! Thank you so much for writing.

niiiiiiiiice

This was the first fanfiction I ever read and what got me hooked. I didn't know that you could review without an account at the time :P but I thought I should tell you that. Great job!

I loved this chapter it made me feel like i was about to cry at any moment

Omfg such a good story its only been 3 chapters and im already in love with it