Lov it! Thi is exactly what I think these guys would act like inside of Ichigo's inner world. Great job! :D

Interesting and well written!

So you were the person who won the under eighteen's at SMASH! :) Congratulations!

I don't know shit about Bleach (did you notice they mixed our categories up? -.- Sighhh), but this is a very, very nice fic. Your use of descriptive language is excellent (i.e. "The pitch-black sky absorbed the colours in the world, never spitting them back out." and "It was a weak ray of light" particularly stuck out to me), I also particularly enjoy how you wrote the dialogue (like it wasn't entirely formal, you included some accents in there - i.e. ''im ter'. I love fics like that).

All in all, you deserved your place. Fantastic job.

Nah, you didn't fail. It ended with fluff. _

cool is all that this story has to say -

(Cue Mello review. [or the best I can do here...]

Forgive the utter flaming; it is unlike me.)

Interesting? Possibly. As a story? Hardly.

[D'aww, don't listen to him! It's a brilliant story, you!]

Even now I cannot perceive the purpose, if there is any, or if there is a particular meaning to the publishing of this as a story. It's nothing more than a waste of space.

[Don't listen, I say! He's just in denial because he can't write anything as majestic as you can!]

D-denial? (cue glare)

...Screw it. I'm not dealing with you any more.

*ditches*

[/is ditched.

D'aww. Sorry I couldn't send a better review...asdfghjkl; my brain]

D: I don't like Ichigo being all doom and gloom. I mean, yeah, we all know he's kinda useless against Aizen but it's not like him to admit to that, dammit!

"t...he school and the King's house – only to see them slowly build back up again."

When you said "the King" I actually thought of Seretei's King (and in my mind, the real King of Heaven is actually Keigo) OTL

But it's awesome despite my fail! (Y)(Y)(Y) Three thumbs up!

This story's great :D