Any chance for a story about Piccolo's kid?

Haha, hilarious. I liked this story. It was short and sweet. :)

Haha, interesting... though the fact that she looks like Goku is a little strange... I'm going to keep reading though, because this sounds really good. :)

Okay I normally don't like these but it was cute. Very cute.

Love it! Have you ever thought of cont.(ing) Gaszha and Piccolo's story? I think this is a awsome story!

"Piccolo is sexless, like an amoeba." HAHAHAHA that line is my all time favorite loving the story so far _

lol

That was really funny. But really good too. Heh heh, I'd never thought of Piccolo that way before. Interesting...

Vegeta was beyond hilarious... XD Gotta love him.

I like the way you wrote it... and Gaszha wasn't really what I'd consider to be a Mary-Sue... so all in all, well done!

Se-chan

your story was great but too short! _

I almost became teary-eyed at the end of this chapter. Things turned out so well for Piccolo and Gaszha. I like how being in love and having a family has lightened Piccolo's mood.

The passionate exchange between Piccolo and Gaszha in Chapter 7 was well-written; you were very tasteful with that scene. I appreciated that you kept it at a passionate kiss instead of going into lemony details because it would have lessened the emotional impact of that moment. Somehow, that kiss conveyed more emotion and passion than a lovemaking scene would have.

Piccolo was too cute in this chapter. I found his nervousness around Gaszha and his gradual realization of his feelings for her very endearing. This was a tenderly written chapter, and I enjoyed the more intimate interaction between Gaszha and Piccolo.

This chapter was very funny, but took a nice dramatic turn when the others discussed Gaszha's true heritage with her.

Oh, this is priceless! I enjoy an uncomfortable Piccolo around an adoring woman. I like your original character, Gaszha, if only because she can look past Piccolo's hard exterior and appreciate his true appeal.

This is a very sweet fanfic. I know lots of people start off with with something like that, but it's true. I loved it. Piccolo is my favorite too!

Quite an interesting you imagine how powerfull the child would be.

That was swet and so romantic! I feel like crying in joy! ...come to think of it, i'm feeling lonely. ... Great fic! Really touching.