WTF, i'm kinda confuesed
why are they talking in song lyrics?

Hmmm... this confused me. I don't really read songfics, so I didn't know that this was one until I read the comments. Maybe you could use bold font for the words in the song? :)

i liked it!

This is complete shit don't ever try to write again

not good at all! seriously.

i dont like songfics, and to think i just read one annoys me quite a bit.

label next time. maybe youll save yourself from all the flames

this is horrible worst thing i've ever read

This was awful. It was good until they started spouting nonsense. It stopped making sense. I had to read over Annabeth's line of "Now boy you know me well, said I'm that kind of feeling. That kind of soft." a bunch of times to figure out what the heck was going on. And then I thought, "Oh, God. Is this a songfic?" I went to the top, you said some junk about a song, and that did it for me. I quit.

Thumbing through the pages of my fantasies,

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uhh i know its from a song but I really dont get it

Cute:)

What song is that? BTW I like it

It's pretty good. I also love this song!

i dont get it... but i LOVE that song