hello again. i got the time to read all the chapters to your harry potter story. very nice. i liked the whole mythological history thing between the 5 elements. so harry and hermione died from doing research on the mirror? tragic. kinda sad. i thought it was interesting how you twisted the things kendra encountered to be similar to what harry dealt with. still, it worked out very nicely. it's a great continum of the original series!

hey celia! i finally got the chance to check out some of your fan fics. are you excited? heh heh the first chapter is very good, it's kinda like the origanal series. one thing puzzles me not really one. is your story placed in the near future? if it is, is Kendra suppost to be Harry Potter's daughter? and is the bad , the new "Voldamort"? other wise it kept my attention. i didn't know there were more chapters to it, but i'll finish reading them when i can. see yeh at writers guild. (0_o)

my favorit part was the last chapter, Faces of a Mirror. i like it when a story takes a different view. i like the way that you explaned the part about the elements. in my opnion it was a little to close to the book but i see how you would want it to be the same as Kendra's father, to make a conection between the two. i really liked how you potrade Ron, that was good. i really enjoyed reading your story, and one of my favorit charicters is Seal.

That was a great story Celia. I finally got to read it! Let me knopw when you finish a side story. Happy Birthday Jordan!

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A new chapter...interesting twist. I like. What'll happen from here? Plasma is being...well...evil, for a start. Expected. And Kendra has to share her body? I don't like the sound of that...at any rate, a good job. Continue!

Hey Celia,

That was a really great story! Your brother wrote most of it you said? I especially like the end. I'll see you tomorrow at school.

j0u7 fr13nd,

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"By the pricking of my thumbs, something wicked this way comes"

great story!

Nicely done...did I mention this is good? I think that the twists make it interesting, Voldemort is Virgil's father...this'll be good. Very good. Can't wait for more. Keep it up!

Your stories were really excellent. I can't wait to read more. Let me see your next story as soon as you have it written.

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Hey I finally got a chance to read your story. I love it. When are you gonna le me read the next one? y3551c4

not bad, i like this :D

but wasnt your title an actual event that took place in WWII?

hmm...for some reason i think i remember learning about it in history

aw, who knows, but i do like this. please continue

I thought your first chapter was great. Your sentences are so descriptive that I can visualize what is happening in your story. Keep up the great writing!

Nice story. It is almost like the real thing. I think that Kendra has most of the same stuff happen to her as harry. One question I have is who is her mother. The riddle kid is probably voldermon't son. Nice discription and nice story.

So far it's pretty good! Are there going to be any of the known characters such as Sirius or Remus or the Weasleys in this story?

plz write more im dieing to know what happens next