too much - or too few brackets. using these has nice possibility of complicating whole fic, depict character's chaotic or desperate thoughts, sure. but it HAS to be used with conviction, or the mood will end up ruined.

what puzzles me, though, is the fact you managed to avoid such fate. how?

hOW WAS THIS STORY SIMPLE AND AWESOME AT THE SAMETIME?

my bad capslock XD

I dont know how to express how much I like s¿this story 3

this was good! I enjoyed reading it... even though i don't know the fandom XD But i love your writing, so that's why I gave it a try. And now i have to check out why he doesn't speak, lol.