I didn't really like it either.

I hated the movie cause I thought the whole avtar series being in film could have had so much more potential you know. I just thought Shyamalan should have never written it and much of the fav characters weren't in it. I actually thought I could have written a better script. I would have split book one into 2 movies. When I read your script I just loved it, so far I could imagine the opening of the movie and I kind of had the sae idea. This would definitely bring excitement to the audience who aren't familiar. Please do write more, I'm a fan of yours already.

That was so good! I swear, you should have been the director. I didn't really like the cast in the movie but yours are way better. I personally thought that Nicola Peltz and Noah Ringer did a really good job, but Jackson was just horrible. Please continue?

Wow! That was amazing! :D love it!

The movie sound really, really, fast paced. Lol

I didn't even bother to go and see it. I saw an exclusive on nickelodian and when I heard he changed Aang's and Sokka's names and got rid of the kyoshi warriors because he "liked them too much" I was like :O I swear to god if he had changed Katara's name I'd have driven to his house, busted down the door and be like "What the HELL! How dare you call yourself an Avatar fan!" And beat him over the head with the script I don't even want to know about.

It got 2/5 stars cuz of the visual effects. He did something right there I guess but whoever decided to let that Avatar-fan wannabe direct the movie is freaking retarded

Fantastic opening scene! I love that you're writing a script, with specific actors for characters - like a movie director. I like to imagine what the camera would show if a certain movie was made.

One question. I'm glad to see that you'll be including Suki, Azula and Lo & Li. But what about Jet? He was another character who people were disappointed to see was not in M. Night Shyamalan's movie.

This was a much better first part than what was in the actual movie. However, it still seemed a little short, and did not have as good dialogue as it could have had. The entire Southern Water Tribe part of the movie should take at the least 30 minutes. I'll go ahead and explain how I believe the movie should be "split up." (This is the minimum amount of time that should be spent on each part) The South Pole part should be 30-40 minutes. after that, another 10-15 minutes should be spent on the Southern Air Temple. After that,another 50-60 minutes should be spent on the rest of the things (Kyoshi Island, King Bumi, Jeong-Jeong, Water-Bending Scroll, Agni-Kai, Zuko's "Death," etc. Finally, a good 40-50 minutes shold be spent on the final Northern Water-Tribe part. That includes training with Pakku, along with the siege. Does that make a fairly long movie? Yes, it does, but that is what the series deserves. 22 hour and 30 minute movies, to maybe even 3 hour movies for each book. Otherwise, they need to split each book up into two parts, whch would make more money, and allow for 6 very faithful movies. As long as they aren't directed, written, or produced by M. Knight Shyamalan.

could learn from you :)

Boomerang power! XD This is still better than

SO MUCH BETTER THAN !

Seriously if the fans are this good a prfessional like should have been brilliant!

Better than what did that's for sure!

great

plz continue it, ur doin great so far and i cant wait to read the next chapter so plz update soon!

Pretty great, even if it was short!

YAYYY! :D I was waiting FOREVER for you to write more! :D Eh, short, but ah well. IT'S STILL AWESOME! :D