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Reviews For: Broken Heart"

Paris007 2002-10-29 ch 1,	abuseNicely done!
SussieQ 2002-03-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw, I loved the interaction between them. My fav couple on Enterprise. Ignore that Dee creep, she must be a real good "nurse" with an attitude like thay.
Belligerent-road-pylon 2002-02-21 ch 1,	abuseAWSOME! you played out their characters so well!
Casey Greene 2002-02-20 ch 1,	abuseOooooh, hehehehe!!!!!! I love it!!!
T'Paul 2002-02-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseHmmm. I liked the story, but I'm not sure the title quite fits. While I got the immpression that T'Pol was upset over loosing her fiancée, she certainly didn't seem "broken hearted". Anyway it was a very sweet story and I hope you write a follow up. BTW "Dee" is a prick
subspace_butterfly 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abusei have to admit that i agree with everyone's respose to Dee. Were yo just in a bad mood, Dee, or are you like that all the time? Your little analysis of the author was real cute. "i can tell you are young..." yeah, right. I'd like to read your fanfiction, you immature trekkie poser. If it's half as bad as the review you so unjustifiably posted, I'll be glad to flame it. You really, really need to work on sentence structure, capitalization, verb tense, spelling, and overall disposition. You know what I can tell from your flame? That you're a **. And another thing: Trip and Hoshi would be disgusting. What TV show have you been watching? Malcolm and Hoshi forever!!!!!!!!!!
greta2242 2002-02-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was so good!!!
stubadingdong 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseIn response to Dee: It's called fanfic for a reason. It's fiction written by the fans, in no way intended for anyone to take them seriously. I believe there is a term for it: Suspension of Disbelief. Try it sometime and then continue to read fanfic. I'll bet your world will lighten up. One more thing: if you don't like T/T romance stuff, why read it? A little common sense is a great asset to possess.
Quills 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseIn response to rfgarciapa@hotrmail.com...darlin...I have to say I'm a bit offended. I'm 29 years old...I know what romance is. My stories are Trek smut...nothing more..nothing less. Unfortunatly there is no catagory listing for that. Perhaps you read to deeply into my stories as well as other peoples writings. Quills
Dee 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abusenice writing but I sick and tired of T'Pol and Tucker but I can tell your very young and into the Peter Pan little boy phase.Trip, no way who wants Peter pan-he's a young McCoy .I think he's be great with Hoshie.If anyone I see more Archer he's starting to grow into being a Captain and he's starting to understand why the vulcans did what they did.It was Archer who got together with the Doctor to give T'Pol away to stay on Enterprise and it was Archer who claimed-That the vulcans took some thing away from his father and he wasn't going to let them take something that's come to mean a great deal to him. There was only two items on Enterprise that the Vulcans have control over .Their data base which Archer said they could have and T'Pol.And T'Pol spends most of her time with Archer-I was a B5 fan so I know romance doesn't destory a show if you have an good story line and writers.But lets not rush things. And for pushing Trip watch Enterprise see where its leading and stop projecting-Placing lotion on someone one doesn't mean a love affair-I'm a nurse and place lotions and creams on a lot of people who I'm not in love with or sleeping with.Great writing.Story is good you just need a little bit of age to understand that there is just less to a back rub then romance.Romance is understanding,emotional need and an growing love but your still young only the young would pass up a man for a boy.Nice writing .
Mirgonus3 2002-02-18 ch 1,	abuseThis looks like the begining of a series.
Ronda 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like the idea of Trip telling her fiance off.
stubadingdong 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseclaps wildly I like this one. Was confused at first with Trip meeting Kos, but it works. Well done!
Lesa 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis really is going to get interesting. I'm looking forward to more.

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