   FORD B 7/9/10 . chapter 7Really cool read! |
| Garfish 7/4/10 . chapter 5 Great chapter and stories so far. Only error I found was your spelling of one of the drugs from the pharmacy/chemist's shop robbery. It is spelled "Percocet" not "Percoset". I don't mean to be a jerk but being a pharmacist had that error stand out to me. |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 7 Man I love the Locket. you sure got a lot out of it didn't you? |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 6 Keep up the amazing work! |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 5 Bridgett is a nice character, great work. |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 4 I like how you are writing the aftermath. |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 3 great chap |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 2 great work keep it up |
| Leaf Ninja 91 7/3/10 . chapter 1 these are great stories |
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