You shouldn't hate this piece of work you've done. It is done fairly well and it has helped you grow. It made my little heart sad. That's what I get for reading this and listening to Dir en Grey at the same time. . . Feel proud of this. You made me emotional.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, and I really don't have anything to say about it. I vaguely remember something about these characters from another story or stories, but it has been too long and so I really can't offer much.