A very good read... Thank you for sharing.

OHmigaw!Grippoing, edge-of-seat reading! Tight, fast, action packed, in character and... and... and... I need a cigarette... and I don't smoke!

Apart from a few phrases I don't think Snake would use ('Dumbass'. On edit, change that to 'Asshole') the phrasing is excellent. You write conversation well and that's difficult to do. I read the first version of this tale years ago and thought it was rough and unbelievable. I was WRONG! The final version kicks major gluteal mass! Bravo!

Syl

I read this a while ago, and just re-read it recently for a refresher. :-) Good story (and quite true to both peoples' characters)!

Wow! As good as the movie! Don't stop! Only prob is that the transition from Bergstrom's enemy to ally seems weird. Why would he care why Snake's there? Why not just kill him? Also, would Snake really agree to "just talk" in that situation? Otherwise, an absolutely fantastic read.

Damn, girl, you DO know how to write - GOOD stuff! Thank you for a thoroughly entertaining read. As I've said, you have Snake's personality down VERY well, and I liked both the plot and the basic supposition of this story. Keep up the good work!

you done good job on fan fiction of escape fromLA/NYC. I wish that you do more of this.

Really good story, but I already told you that, didn't I?