| Reviews for Serpent's Bride |
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I am just a rapper 5/15/13 . chapter 1I absolutely love this. One of the best story... If not the best one I've ever read. Ignoring the typing format it's amazing. I'm nitpicking the fact that it is Ginevra not Viginia and Blsise is a boy but making him a girl really helps the story. but it does matter this is 11? Yeah about 11 years old. You hit everyone. Fleur, Hermione, Ginny and Draco. Everything is exciting. The mysteries, suspense, lust, sadness, happiness. Killing Lucius was smart. Blended the Weasleys and Malfoys better! I haven't finished it yet but I do believe it is Blaise and Harry plotting to kill Gunny. I'm looking forward to see! I sadly don't want to end one of the best stories I've ever read. It doesn't matter you're probably not even reading this. It doesn't matter but I can't go on without telling someone how amazing this story is. :) |
lucyhm 3/2/13 . chapter 1HER NAME ISN'T VIRGINIA IT'S GINEVRA ARGH |
Pamomo 2/6/13 . chapter 16Gahh. Amazing Drinny fic this is. |
Guest 10/12/12 . chapter 16 Good...but confusing... |
Rose1999 9/12/12 . chapter 2... I thought Ginny's name was Ginevra... and wasn't Draco's grandpa called Abraxas? |
A 8/30/12 . chapter 16 Loved this book! Thought u got the personalities of the characters a bit wrong at the beginning but it improved in the later chapters. I get u got some things wrong like Ginny's full name and Blaise's gender but as u wrote this 10 years ago before that stuff was published on the books it doesn't really matter. U said u were going to write a sequel but u never did. Please, please, please, please, please write one as u ended on a cliff hanger and just look how many comments u've got! |
Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 7 Ghosts cant pick things up. They pass right through objects. |
Angel 8/3/12 . chapter 16 First off I think your story is lovely for the first eleven chapters. There were some grammar and technical things that were there but nothing so bad that it made it difficult to read the story. I really liked the pacing and the slow build of the relationship. I felt the climax came and resolved too quickly. There were NOT enough mentions of Ginny's cat. I felt some scenes of her cuddling or confiding in the cat would have enhanced the story. Some more of Ginny's job and her secretary would have been nice as well. |
cuteminnie 7/26/12 . chapter 10 I jus wanted to tel u that it was beautiful... Sweet... :) |
JayMJane 7/15/12 . chapter 10Ins't this chapter the most perfect love revelation moment of all times? So full of emotions. I just loved it. Perfect! |
beastybri32 5/30/12 . chapter 8sigh.. ginny's starting to annoy me.. i wish their love would develop already. but patience |
jowilleatyuh 5/6/12 . chapter 16OWW- My jaw hurts from dropping open- Literally- no joke- Remus of ALL people? *faints* No wonder Lucius would be so protective! Hell... A Marauder with a Black other than Sirius... hehe... off to scavenge for some NxR stories xD *chuckles* Beautifully written; it truly was- I love how everything was gradual instead of it being abrupt and all. You honestly have made Ginny & Draco one of my newest favorite couples xD |
jowilleatyuh 5/6/12 . chapter 15Love the ending of this chapter; hell the beginning of this chapter had my heart running so quickly- Perfectly described xD |
jowilleatyuh 5/6/12 . chapter 12Holy shit... That definitely surprised me... |
jowilleatyuh 5/6/12 . chapter 1LOVE the beginning- I was never fond of Ginny x Draco pairings [my pagedisplay page] but this one honestly caught my eye- Good summary; off to see how this turns out |