Great story, and great writing. It sent chills up my back, and goosebumps down my arms. Perfect characterization, too. Thank you for writing this.

What an incredible story. Absolutely in-character - you write a better Mat than Sanderson does, no exaggeration. I loved Mat's determination to save his daughter, the lengths to which he was willing to go, the fact that the story *didn't* have a happy ending. There is trouble ahead. But although I would love to see the confrontation with Tuon, see Atean try to adjust to life in the Tower, the story is perfect as it is. One of the best pieces of WoTfic I've ever read.

Well done, I wish there was more of it. It feels like Mat, a lot of the fan fiction doesn't. None of us are Jordan, hell even Sanderson isn't Jordan but this made me want to read the next page, which is the highest praise I can give a story.

Poor Mat :( this is very in-character, though - I am absolutely positive that, given the choice, he would choose Aes Sedai for his daughter over damane, even though he hates Aes Sedai and the Power. Light, anything is better than damane!

Keep writing!

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Awww... Poor Mat. The guy just can't catch a break.

This was amazing. One of the best pieces of writing I have ever read, and I mean EVER. I'm speechless. I really hope you'll write another chapter someday

Wow. Really good job. Write on! (yay puns)

Also, I think it would be really cool to see what happens after all this. Thanks

wowwww this is amaaaazing! love it

i loved ur story!

A very interesting story. I like the extent of the backstory, it creates a good setting and sums up how things are going since the last battle.

You captured some of Mats character, and it is hard to do so with somone elses character however i feel that WoT vernacular would have been better used, in stead or "arse" in particular.

Over all a detailed and well written peice. Im looking forward to browsing you other fics.

nice and possible even

Well written and I can totally see Mat doing just that.

Please don't *ever* stop writing WoT fanfics! I mean it. Wow.

I read the last three books of the WoT last week, every waking moment thinking about it, dreaming about it, and I'm still unable to understand the characters as well as you do. Who *are* you? Robert Jordan Reborn?

I'm in awe. Seriously.

Thank you (again).

A little gem of a story. You put tears in my eyes. Poor Mat.

Well done!