I love that you used some french! i learned french in school. this is funny, thats exactly what he would do, work on some peice of technology for hours. and the ending is cute :D

Ha ha, I like that she didnt understand what he meant. did you have to read 'To Kill a Mockingbird' in school? i hadt to. maybe thats what inspired you :D

Oh, my... Now there's an adventure I wanna read more about! Donna, The Doctor, Jack, Martha, and... Jenny! I kinda want to hear why he didn't want to sit in the middle, but I guess Jack has contributed to the list of reasons...