| Reviews for Little things |
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xxgabigailxx 1/26/11 . chapter 1/flail/ I LOVE THIS. IT MADE ME SO HAPPY. THANK YOU. |
rezmutt 11/4/10 . chapter 1this is such a cute story. i love it. my favorite part is where he gives her the bracelet |
xprezurself 10/20/10 . chapter 1i waas smiling the whole time i was reading your story. it's cute :) |
Redaholicccahhh 9/12/10 . chapter 1 OHMIGASH! This is so cute! I really love it! |
the sylph 7/31/10 . chapter 1Wow, I really loved this story. It was really sweet! There were just very minor mistakes, just a few spelling mistakes. *You also used the wrong "threw". It should have been this "through" Great job! |
jellybeansinabottle 7/18/10 . chapter 1It's a cute and pretty fic I quite enjoyed :) Please continue writing more! |
Amethyst.Amaryllis 7/12/10 . chapter 1It's a great story! In moments, I caught myself saying "aww" at the cute parts. There were some spelling errors,but the story itself is amazing and I love your writing style. - |
fruitcastle250 7/8/10 . chapter 1I loved the ending,it was so cute and fluffy. :) |
Mistress.Of.Black 7/8/10 . chapter 1Hn..sweet..Good job.. |
Music-lovers2 7/4/10 . chapter 1aww very sweet. Love it! |
Sakura's Unicorn 7/4/10 . chapter 1Such a sweet story! Really amazing that you aren't a native English speaker because I only saw a few tiny errors! But your story moved along so well...for such a tiny story, you really packed a good deal of time and emotion into it. I love how Sakura is so oblivious to Sasuke's gestures until he works up to a big one! Great job. Excellently done! |
Naruto-fan-Okami-chan 7/4/10 . chapter 1I thought this story was very cute! With Sasuke, it truly is the little things that matter. (Though the big thing of kissing her was great as well.) I was surprised at the end when you said you're not an English speaker, because your writing was actually better than a lot of fluent English speaker's stories I've read! Sure, there were a few mistakes, just using the wrong word here and there. (Like at the end it was supposed to be "fallen in love" not "falled in love" "falled" isn't even a word.) But it wasn't like...misspellings and bad grammar and all this other stuff I've seen people make, so I have to congratulate you on that! I enjoyed reading this story. I'll probably check out some of your other SasuSaku ones later. (Well, the English ones. I don't speak a lick of Portuguese.) Thanks for sharing! Okami-chan |