Please! make it longer! its too good!

YU NO UPDATE!

Excellent story and an interesting idea!

Just found this and I really enjoyed it. I especially loved the final scene where Logan asks Veronica out. It was really sweet. I think you nailed it.

Hehe, I missed reading your stories so when I was going back to your profile to find old chapters, I happened to find this one and I'm just about kicking myself in the head for not noticing it before. I like this for your unique take on all of the characters. Lilly's death was the catalyst that thrust everyone into this winding spiral of corruption, and I like seeing everybody without that heavy burden lingering in the air making everything so much more... morbid I guess and intense. You always write these characters so well but I'm sure you know that and have already had many many comments to tell you as such :) I'm super excited to see more from you whenever you find your inspiration and I think a little waiting only makes the story better _ Thanks for sharing your work!

You have got Logan's cocky sarcasm down to a T!

Cute and fluffy. I like the sarcastically portrayed LV on the show, but your characterizations were nice and sweet. Nice change of pace.

Lovely! Totally sweet and light, really liked it :)

This is such a cute fic!

Ahh, their first kiss - they are just adorable together. I hope you write more to this story.

I think that Logan and Lilly function much better as friends than lovers. ;) I hope Logan talks to Veronica soon.

A very interesting start. I wonder if this Duncan will ever be able to let Veronica go completely.

I love this view of how they might've been different if... it's really a great story!

I like it very much, as always

your stories are so good !

Thank you for the chapter with Veronica's POV. They were both so cute and their first kiss was really sweet.