 squib 7/25/04 . chapter 3 I once told you that you are the master(mistress?) of one-shots. I now add that you are also the master of angst/romances. The best I've ever had the pleasure of reading the works of. The actual fic was excellent. It was seriously very very good. I feel so helpless with these lame words... I can't express myself properly... I need more powerful words... |
 Daintress 3/7/04 . chapter 3This looks like it's off to a great start, though I don't think I want to know exactly what Ginny and Hermione went through before the end of Voldemort. Keep up the good work. Hope you'll take a look at my fics as well. |
 wallyflower 9/13/03 . chapter 3I loved the characterizations, and your execution of a long-used storyline. Please, please write more. |
 deSevera can't be arsed to sign in 8/27/02 . chapter 3 i loved. Really. Hermione gets the glory (ok so empty glory but you know what I mean) brilliant |
 Lady Tiffany 3/11/02 . chapter 3 i admire you for being able to write such a captivating story, for i know it is hard, because i have tried myself. anyways, i just wanted to say keep up the good work.
-Lady Tiffany |
 snowieaddz 3/2/02 . chapter 3wow! That was such a treat to read. It really makes your think. I'm not sure I understand whats wrong with Ginny.. but then I ma rather tired. I'll probably need to go back and reread. I just love your writing style! |
 Fier1 2/26/02 . chapter 3well. i've read this before you posted it, even, but you know i think it rocks. one question though. more of an observation. this seems to be rather connected with Beggars; the whole mother sort of thing and all. anyway. hope you write more soon.. and thanks for letting me see how things turn out before anyone else, heh. |
 Courtney-Christina 2/25/02 . chapter 3Gee, how did you guess? It's one of my favorite books. So how's Harry going to react to all the stunningly new revalations and blah blah blah. When will Ronniekins wake up? |
 Exes and Ohs. 2 2/23/02 . chapter 3This is..weird..fo realz man. But good! I like it, in some hella stupid ass way.. ;)
Keep it coming! I want to know what happens next. |
 annali 2/22/02 . chapter 3 ::sigh:: I love it. I absolutely love it. Write more! Annali |
 rabbit and -v-Jinx-v 2/22/02 . chapter 3I like it. The girls do the rescuing and there are actual consequences for the choices. Good job! |
 Lily 2/22/02 . chapter 3 I love it!Its such a good very romantic setting ..Hermione as the hero huh?Who knew?Certainly not me! |
 Reiken 2/22/02 . chapter 3 Good job! The chapters are a bit short, but that is only bothering me because I want more. The characters feel right, though Snape is more kind than I normally think of him. But experiences change people. The grammar is solid and the dialog flows well. More would be good, more story of course, but also more in each scene. I like that Hermione killed Voldie. Heh, heh, heh. And I like seeing her with Snape. _ |
 LilyAyl 2/22/02 . chapter 3The first chapter, with Hermione studying her hands was the best. You could have turned that into such a great little ficlet had you wanted to. Oh well. Hands are the communicators of the soul. Check out my fic, Cruciatus? Music of the Night? |
 Lioncourtess 2/22/02 . chapter 3I absolutly love this story. It's most beautiful! |