i hope u write more soon :)
thanks anyway i really had fun reading it

u have to write more... i want to read more

if u just make it longer ... but still amazing

wow amazing ... i love arkarian and isabel so much

They are so sweet. Please keep 0n writing. I love your story.

aww, really cute, and I love arkarians personality, Ive never realized that he has raised in a six-centuries-older society, so his manners are different of ours...

besides, its nice to know that ethans okey after rochelles death, and hes happy again D

and, OMG, love that part...

"and how was Loverboy this morning?"

hahaha

loved it, was really funny

and, also this part:

"You mean you did it last night, and it didn't live up to your expectations?"

hahaha, ethans soo funny

however, i loved your fic, i hope you update soon, please, i wanna read more...

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isacullen-timeguardian

so so good!

when is more comming

Please, Please, PLEASE continue! This is a very sweet, very cute, very well written story! :)

Ooo soo romantic! :) I have yet to find an actually good arkarianXisabel fic and it think this might be a good one, but too early to tell. :)

Totally awesome story, I really love this. Can't wait for an update! :)

Short and sweet! I was excited to see you updated this, but was a little disappointed by the length; I am anxiously awaiting a plot.

If you are at all interested in my advice, longer chapters (even as short a page long in Microsoft Word, about 500 words) are generally better accepted among the fanfiction-reading community. I have read stories that have chapters as long as 20 pages or more. Having said that, you have the creative license to do whatever you want at whatever pace you wish.

-Ivy

The first few chapters are very sweet! I am really enjoying your writing style, and the characters are definitely believable these short little chapters. I look forward to seeing if you continue!

-Ivy