|Reviews for Quake 3 New beginnings|
| Majh 6/1/11 . chapter 1
Hate to be nit-picky but make a family sounds really weird. As if people clone themselves to "make a family". Personally, it would've sounded better if it was start a family.
| Corax2009 11/26/10 . chapter 1
Psst... you meant to say "manner" instead of "manor" ;)
Otherwise, this flows well.