   pwenie 4/22/11 . chapter 1Soooo cute |
| Fungirl a.k.a. Alexzane T 3/6/11 . chapter 1 I liked it
continue it (maybe have a scene where he protects her and he get really mad at the person that hurts her
try to stay in the same tense
other than that it was pretty good. :D |
| anon 7/9/10 . chapter 1 It was a cute story, but all the grammatical error made it hard to understand completely. |
| Kirin Ieyatsu 7/4/10 . chapter 1 aww cute! XD |
| HILLARYDv 7/4/10 . chapter 1 _ What a good story :DD |
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