Great fic, I printed this a long time ago and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, the story is great and I like your style of writing fics!

Wow, a fic with Lanfa in it. I've been looking out for one. I know she is barely even an noticible character but I do believe she deserves a chance to shine. I always believed she'd have thought of Long in a different way, being with girlly infatuations, but I think it's good of her to think of him as a brother instead. And a little hinting of Xion x Lanfa was unexpected but cool. Being open minded with pairings is always good, and there is always a way to make pairings come together.

Wicked short story; be proud to have done a good piece of writing. _

That was very good! I wish you would've continued it a bit.?

Do the next chapter for crying out loud slow poke!

I really enjoyed this fic, because it shows what might happen with Xion after he's "cured" of the Unborn infection. I also thought Lanfa was a cute character, what little we saw of her, and I'm glad to see you've tried a hand at writing her in. I'd like to see more!