Oh i really love this fanfic I hope you update soon :D

okay so i definately love this its an amazing twist with the whole cutting thing and it totally makes sense that sabine would think that ever is cutting. i really hope you keep adding on

its really good. :) are ever and roman gonna end up together?

I can't really give you anything in terms of constructive critism, because I've only read two chapters... but I can say that they are amazing so far!

i really like this story line, please keep going :)

This whole chapter was boring. And I didn't even catch the point of it.

Plz continue the story i like it ]

Very nice. There are few Immortals series fanfics that are actually good. Keep up the good work, and can't wait to read the next chapter!

PLEASE update this soon - because, Immortal or not (I AM an immortal - honest!) I will DIE if you don't update this soon!

Interesting start. Can't wait. I totally agree with u about Romans ending- I actually started to understand him, and possibly even favor him. That was so tragic. I mean he had his reasons for being the way he was. Any way I am glad to finally see an Roman and Ever story. I also thought that 'black flame' Ever was more exciting and favorable. She was so annoying in the previous novels. That's my oppinion however.