Thank you for writing this. It ended up being an intriguing exploration of gender and sexuality, along with the side of cheesecake and lemonade. Both of which I enjoyed. thanks again,
Not only do I get a theory about the whereabouts of Mrs. Kuno but it seems like the police do exist in Ranma... now when will they arrest Genma for child abuse, Happosai for his sexual escapades, Ryoga for property damage, Mousse for attempted murder, and Akane for assult and battery to Ranma?
This story is hilariously underrated. I had to choke back the bile with kuno section in the first chapter but it was pretty good after that! (admittedly there was nothing wrong with that it's just Kuno relationships make me cringe).
, I totally understand your feelings about your medical history. From a fellow sick-child, I'm sorry you were in the same boat as me. Even when generally recurrent my diseases [(throat, ears and nose (allergy) in order of recurrence)] and when my normal is 36.5c (don't know fahrenheit, sorry, the usual normal 37.5 and 104F is 40C), even then, i don't remember having any hallucinated dreams... well i usually never remember any dream...
OK, what I'm trying to say is this:
1) I understand you. I mean a personal level. at least in this one.
2) I am glad you write your "self insert" of part of your live, because it fits and you did it AWE-FU#$ING-SOME.
3) I'm sure as heaven exist I will someday soon STEAL the dream for my own fic. so think about this as like i was asking for your permission of something like that.
BTW, i am not commenting anything else in your fic cause i don't like worshiping. i really can not do anything else in the way you write. fuck you if don't like it. (jejejeje) nah, you are great.
do you wanna a comparative?
in the "ranma goes girl/girly" you are tne "vengeance and a half" (of ) and/or the "team 8" (naruto)
these three fics (yours, vengeance and a half and team 8) are unespected, twisted and hiper descriptive (in a good way) in the caracter feelings and drivings.
in case you still fail to understan me or i fail in explain myself:
"Fire", writter of "vengance and a half" and "sailor ranko", now is legend. Capicce?
Yup, when you write about a controversial topic such as homosexuality(or any kind of sexuality, really), you're bound to see a lot of very strong responses, from those that would declaim it to those that congratulate you for having the sheer cojones to write the thing in the first place.
As for me, I believe that the story is the story, nothing more, nothing less. If someone feels that there should be a particular scene, or that the story should go in a particular direction, then they are more than capable of writing that for themselves. I too, eschew suggestions to my stories, for much the same reasons; were I to take them, it wouldn't be the same story anymore. I have two stories ongoing at the moment that would wither and die horribly if I changed the plotlines for them that I have laid out in my notes.
I'm glad that you stick to your stories, they are highly entertaining. Not just for the sex, either. You have a delightful way of describing scenes that make them very believable,dream sequences notwithstanding for good reason. One way or another, fantastically done.
I have to say, although you've said this was all intended as comedy (and although i dont really expect you to read this review 10 years after finishing the story) i didnt laught out loud at any point i can remember in newRanma. I did cry a few times though.
Maybe that's just me superimposing my own circumstances onto your characters though. i can relate pretty strongly to not knowing...
Someone suggested this story to me a while back and I kind of spaced it. Now I'm SO glad I came back across the message and read it.
This story is funny, sexy, intense, and sweet. A real rollercoaster of emotion, in a very good way. It's very much worth the time to read. I love how Ranma learned not only to cope with but accept his girl form as part of himself through the story, and the old injury affecting his development makes SO much sense! I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I'll have to look at more of your work and find out what other great stuff is in there...
I enjoyed this story a good deal. I thought it dealt with its subject matter in a serious fashion for some parts but also dealt with the fan-service aspects quite well too. I liked how you wrote Ranma's dealing with his sexuality, it was an interesting character and psychological study especially in regards to his curse. Interestingly, it seems like you wrote a much deeper story then you at first intended :P, but you did it very well.
The only problems I had with the story was the growing femininity that you had Ranma experiencing...You had at points him acting quite feminine but then quite suddenly threw him back to being entirely male except seemingly having a feminine sexual drive to other girls. That part was hard to come to terms with, I thought that at least you would have him come to accept both aspects of his curse, but this was pulled out in only the last few chapters and I find that disappointing. Regardless however it was a very interesting story, thanks for writing it :).