no matter how many times i read this i can never get tired of this story and did he really call her a ** shot if i was victor he would have already been dead from stop

** AWESOME STORY ... I CANT BELIVEVE THEY DIDNT UNDERSTAND SHAME :(

AWS LOVE

YOU GO GIRL/ORORO

is logan scared lol jk

*Tears*

oh no whats gonna happen now

so many hints/leads in this one ;) hm...

a month a togetherness what will happen ...?

"why is da chpaters gettin short"

poor magneto lol "“Now, what could that be?…….” widening his eyes, he said to the empty room. “Um, Well, that happened a little faster than I imagined”."

ah such a horrible thing to lie... imagine if your life was a lie horrible huh? god chapie

im glad you didnt resist i didnt see that one and i read the chapter titles before i started to read

suspenseful accurate awesome beginning

I'm so happy you wrote this story. I love the Storm/Sabertooth pair. He's the ultimate bad boy. So sexy. About your story, I liked seeing the behind the scenes of the Brotherhood. It was fun imagining them kind of as good guys. I mean, they have their ideals, right? I liked the interplay of those characters, Toad with Mystique, Sabertooth with Magneto. Good job.

You did a really good job with this story! I love Storm/Sabretooth stories. So much passion and emotions. A+