I thought I'd read this again tonight, and I was like, "hang on. I think this is different." I still love it though. I hope dealing with my comma and semi-colon abuse doesn't keep you from getting another chapter up soon because I can't wait to read the next one!

Very good i liked it the story is very interesting i cant wait to find out what happens please continue!

OOOOO! i love it is this going to be a Harry Hermione story or their childrens story? I am just curious i really cant wait for the next update please tell your beta thank you for correcting your grammer:)