You had me going up and down on a rollercoaster of love and hate. Poor Ron... Poor Hermione.

There are alot of really good aspects in your writing. Alot of things I enjoyed and alot of things I just try not to think about.

Tyler was an adorable lil boy!!

Thanks for sharing.

Wow. first I read your story in french, but the chapters hasn't be updated for a while so I decided to read in english. It's a wonderful story. I love it. You're a very good author.
Sorry if my english is bad
Bye
Mev

So I read this a couple of years ago, before I was actually signed up on , and I just wanted to say I loved this. It's one of my favorite Ron/Hermione's I've ever read.

Amazing job.

It is a shame that you stop posting, i loved your stories.

this was an excellent story and althought it did keep me on the page for 2days it was excellent, for the main basic that at three parts it had many many tears coming out of me, especially at the end. my friends will be extra happy i have now finished this story because all the time whilst i was still reading it i annoyed them by talking about it ALOT! This had me reeling from shock, sadness and beening frightened (i am rather sad) this was excellent and although it was rather long i do think that every thing that you put in it was relevent, i loved the character of eden martin and can really imadgine her.

Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you you had me so worried. aw! i really really do feel for hermione. this is definatley (sorry, must learn how to spell that!) the best fan fic i have read EVER!

Please don't kill Ron! Anyone but Ron!! Or Hermione. Or Tyler! Please! Oh. My. God. You are a genius. Your fic is just, well, i'm in awe, really! I wish I could write fics like this!

I feel really really really sorry for mrs. jones. her daughter gets murdered and then her husband dies. Poor woman! Still hellish though!

I would say I belong in Hufflepuff. I'm enjoying thhis story so much, i've read all this in about an hour, so i've ended up getting grounded. Damn you and your evil cliff hangers! No, i really really like this story, probably the best r/h fic i've ever read. Ever!

This is good. This is very good. So dark. So mysterious. So enigmatic. OK, enough with the long words. Did Draco send Ron to kill that Skye person?Oh, and I think at the end of a chpter you should have put DA DA DA! Just for effect. No, seriously, the story is fab so far and I can see it getting better.

This was one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read. what a sad ending though.
by the way, the penseive does not show different prespectives. you simply relive it.

I'm not finished reading it yet but wow! is this a great story!

Even though u wrote this yonks ago i feel i had to post a review to comment on a fic which intriguided me, as did your personality judged from your end comments on each chapter. Firstly, the tone of those comments which seemed to become gradually more irritable as the fic progeressed. These people are only trying to help and dont deserved to be slagged off so try to cut them a bit of slack ok, poor grammar and spelling is a nuisance to some. Secondly, in later chapters u make references to the complexity of Ron's situation and explain that potions cant solve Rons problems, yet the ending is basically a longer more drawn out process of exactly that. His Dante personality seems to morph into something unrecognisable from earlier in the fic without a real and emotional explanation to why this change happened, and in this context references to "subtle plot devices" seems untoward. For example no explanation is ever given as to why Charles' daughter was killed or why Dante was pulled off the job and this forms the bedrock of the story, a major oversight. Personally i feel that before you can critisise reviewers, the story must stand up to the highest standards, anything less is hypocrisy. I believe this is why you have so few reviews for what is an otherwise very stimulating and interesting fic. 8/10. I would like to add one more thing, if you are writing a mystery dont author note "I bet you didnt see that coming" because frankly the twists passed that of approximately chapter 7 were predictable, particularly Charles' death which was painfully obvious. Also dont say "dont get attatched to x" whats the point of the mystery then ? While i thoroughly enjoyed the majority of this fic it has some deficiencies which i feel were largely overlooked by the review base. I'd just like to add that the negative tone of this review was in a sense a rise to a challenge which, as a writer and reviewer was issued, perhaps unintentionally, from the tone and substance of your author notes. Good luck with your writing and perhaps we shall cross swords again, if so i look forward to the challenge. 8/10

Love this story!! Love it!

Good Story