I must admit that it took me some time to understand what was going on with Susan, but when I finally understood a smile came all over my face.

So cute your story.

Thanks for sharing!

Aw that was sweet

That's sweet! lg Luna

I prefer Peter/Susan's stories, but this one is a good family story. :D

I liked this piece, a lot. The idea of Susan being lost is a huge symbolic concept. However, the ending was not as I expected, and I was left feeling satisfied- because it wasn't cliche.

-omishiloh

Lovely. A hint of how she finds her way home. Wonderfully well done. (:

I do not know what to make of the dream but I think that's what makes it work so well. Good job.

Wonderful job! The dreamworld was well written and really had me wondering I love the way you smoothed it out.

awww. Was that a dream sent byb Aslan to keep her on the right track or just your common, garden variety dream?