I have been waiting to find a story in which Sarah's father catches Jareth in her room. I mean come on, how hilarious is that: the Goblin King versus a pissed off daddy. Not to mention, what responsible father would even let Jarteh NEAR his daughter, let alone in her room. I really wish you'd continue this.

I am rolling with laughter, truly. *wipes tears* After so many dark, dramatic, epic stories like KL Morgan, this had me rolling and giggling and oh, it was such a breath of cracky fresh air. I know it's been years, but I just wanted to drop the word it's still very much loved.

*lolz* He ought to have looked under her bed or into the wardrobe. They usually hide in there. -

nice. Very funny. Plz write more.

I like it! It so cool! Jareth was right!

Loved that last line. Very funny, very compelling. I loved what you've done with the characters, loved how masterfully you slipped their thoughts in and described things. Marvelous. Simply marvelous.

You know, I don't think anybody's ever done something from this POV. It was a fascinatingly unique piece, and I'm overjoyed that someone with your indescribable talent was the one to cover this new ground. Amazing job, this.

AND?

Mua ha ha...

I love this fic. Short, sweet, and very entertaining. A little less Jareth-iciousness than usual, but good. Loves it.

*chants* MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!...

That was . Yes, interesting.

well? what? next chapter? this is funny :-D hee hee

*Definitely* belongs in the humor category. I laughed a lot... the last sentence is priceless. Great job. :-D

Cool story, please dont' have it end there.

Wow! Amazing! What an original idea! I love this story, it's great! An amazing piece of work!