my name is noell your story is nice is this princess you. you are lovly the line is sow very sweet and frel as a gum drop being dvoword in the prasan sow thank u

This chapter eerily reminds me of this one time I tried to play through with Luciano and the Klaus asked to be my partner.

Well done! :D

I know it has been a while since you started this story, but I very much enjoyed this first Chapter and am interested in seeing a new one! _ keep up the great work.

I enjoyed this. The descriptions of the dance were very good and gave me a good picture of the scene. The way the dialogue is constructed is also very good. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.