 GreenEyes7 4/7/06 . chapter 1I liked Endless Schmaltz. It wasn't quite the same as Gundam Fling like you said, but it would be harder with less material to work with.
Also, some randomness.
Heero: What the hell? Who put these stupid wings on it?
I have the craziest thought just then of Sailormoon going from regular SM to Super Sailormoon. Heero should be happy that he doesn't have to spout out a catch phrase eveytime he wants Wing to attack a mobile suit. |
 KnoT 7/28/04 . chapter 1I agree that Endless Schmaltz didn't pack the same witty punch Gundam Fling did, but it is unique and funny in its own right. I felt that there was a difference between the two in that Endless Schmaltz doesn't seem to quite flow like Gundam Fling does, but each line seems much more planned out and funny. It's not a bad thing, and I think it adds a new dimension to the story.
The interplay between the characters was once again hilarious. The blatant insult of originality by Duo was also amusing, and as others have said, I adore that quote by Heero when he said "Shut up before I kill you so hard that you die." _ Injecting the "Fans" into the story was also a creative and interesting touch.
Again, I found the Bandai Action Figures lines to be simply hilarious because they are so spontaneous and unexpected... although most of the fic. is like that. I can't point out everything I like about the fic., actually, because there's too many things I found to be funny. If I had to nitpick, I'd just say that I thought the ending wasn't quite as funny as Gundam Fling, but that isn't really a big deal. As I said, each line really has its own bit of humor, and the story is really captivating. Plus, it's cynical and witty! There really isn't anything not to like, and I think you were worrying a bit too much. The two stories are both funny in their own right, and that is enough. |
 Nightheart 2/27/04 . chapter 1 The funniest thing in endless walts was the fact that Trowa's mobile suit has a clown mask on it; And it does back flips. It might be taking the crcus thing a little far... Enough about trowa. Oh, and the new name comeback for zechs, how many names does he have? And yes, actually; I was expecting a little more $$ kicking. |
 red pill 5/29/03 . chapter 1LOL!
i lapfed out loued...a lot...this rocks. im repting the same thing over and over agine. ill shut up now...
THIS ROCKS!
ok...now i shut up... |
 Majenta 3/20/02 . chapter 1 Bravo-this is just as funny, if not funnier, than Gundam Fling! Keep up the good work! |
 Redundant Goddess 3/4/02 . chapter 1Hmmmmmmmmmmmm indeed. In a nutshell. This was very funny. Tee hee hee.! |
 Autum 2/18/02 . chapter 1 Well, it's 12:26 in the morning...and I'm sitting here, trying to crack up silently, so i don't wake up the house...yeah..well, i guess that's it... |
 hype 2/18/02 . chapter 1 This IS as funny as Gundam Fling. BELIEVE THE HYPE! |
 Zelda1 2/18/02 . chapter 1"Shut up before I kill you so hard that you die."
ROTFLMAO!
I liked the fast pace of your parody - oh, and your Wufeianyone interactions (still snickering over Trowa and his "enemy" shorts, too!) |
 Lady Date 2/18/02 . chapter 1That was to funny. You summerize the series like that. |