 xXxMartelxXx 6/26/11 . chapter 1I would be lying if I said I wasn't interested, especially after reading that link about the Möbius time loop. |
 zen129 5/4/11 . chapter 1please update! don't let the reviews bothere ya! your story is good so far and i actually want to know what happens! is Tom going to find him or Mr. Filch? update! |
 Immortalis Cruor Elf 3/9/11 . chapter 1update sooooooooooooon!1 |
 Kyae 8/23/10 . chapter 1A very intruiging first chapter, and I hope you continue with thisx story |
 RRW 8/22/10 . chapter 1Interesting start...looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Mynet 7/30/10 . chapter 1loved the story and hope you update soon |
 Kamiyoukai 7/13/10 . chapter 1a rather interesting start to the story;
i can see real potential in both this story and your ability as a writer
i can't wait for you to continue so that I may further enjoy your story
please update soon
thanx _ |
 lazyslothwho 7/10/10 . chapter 1Well, this seems to be off to a good start. I don't really have much to critic, except perhaps a bit longer chapters. Sounds good so far! Please update soon-I'd like to see where this goes. Your writing is clear, and refreshingly grammatical.
Sloth |
 I-Love-Trunks1 7/7/10 . chapter 1I love it!
Cant wait for more! |