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Reviews for: The Möbius
xXxMartelxXx 6/26/11 . chapter 1
I would be lying if I said I wasn't interested, especially after reading that link about the Möbius time loop.
zen129 5/4/11 . chapter 1
please update! don't let the reviews bothere ya! your story is good so far and i actually want to know what happens! is Tom going to find him or Mr. Filch? update!
Immortalis Cruor Elf 3/9/11 . chapter 1
update sooooooooooooon!1
Kyae 8/23/10 . chapter 1
A very intruiging first chapter, and I hope you continue with thisx story
RRW 8/22/10 . chapter 1
Interesting start...looking forward to the next chapter.
Mynet 7/30/10 . chapter 1
loved the story and hope you update soon
Kamiyoukai 7/13/10 . chapter 1
a rather interesting start to the story;

i can see real potential in both this story and your ability as a writer

i can't wait for you to continue so that I may further enjoy your story

please update soon

thanx _
lazyslothwho 7/10/10 . chapter 1
Well, this seems to be off to a good start. I don't really have much to critic, except perhaps a bit longer chapters. Sounds good so far! Please update soon-I'd like to see where this goes. Your writing is clear, and refreshingly grammatical.

Sloth
I-Love-Trunks1 7/7/10 . chapter 1
I love it!

Cant wait for more!
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