this entire story is amazing i love the way you leave your readers wanting more to happen and you make sure that more actually does happen which is crazy. you should try to write a book someday if it intrests you i think you would make a great story considering that you already have made some. i have read all of your stories you put on here and they are all fantastic and they all had me on the edge of my seat. everytime i thought something horrible was going to happen it did, but in the end you still gave us that happily ever after scene and made us think about their future life and i always love that in stories. you are really talented at writing i think that you are a doctor when it comes to writing the continuing story of such a powerful tv series. i hope you continue writing about many things and i hope it makes you as happy writing the stories, as as it makes all of the people reading them.

Of course it happened I should know I wrote it :-D you do understand the concept of 'fan fiction' right? It's fictional stories made up by fans for fans. Hoped you enjoyed it!

that is not what happened!

lol, tom is getting a lot of requests. i want a sister, i hope you were shooting out boys. lol

Great Story!

I enjoyed this story very much. I love this couple and was so happy that you ran with the proposal and wrote this story for them. You did a great job. Lots of humor, passion and love made it very pleasant reading. Thanks for making me smile.

Great story. Please write more for this couple.

This was amazing! I loved it (:

A really cute ending!

Glad you finished this little happy fic :)

Nice job and look forward to more of your writing!

that was wonderful! u have got 2 write another one!

Hey maggs, I have to reply to you this way because either you don't have an account here or you're not logged in so I cannot private maessage you like I have done with the rest of the reviewers.

Thank you for your wonderfully kind words, you have been my biggest reviewer/supporter here so thank you.

To answer your question, 'YES' Tom did ask Xtina to marry him at the end of 'Road Narrows', and I think the full episode is up on the TNT: Hawthorne website so you can go there and watch it.

omg i was reading the reviews for this story and i can't believe on Road Narrows he said marry me i thought he said maybe well that shows what i know. oh well cane someone tell me if its true or not cause i'm like totally confused i can't bel;eive he said marry me. awesome story great detailing i could definately see the characters in this story. You described everything so well. I am so glad you really took time to think about their character's. You've got Christina and Bobbie down good. I almost felt i was watching the show. It was that good. Okay i'm gonna stop writing cause i want to so yeah bye. Happy writing. Maybe you can become an author one day

omg i was re-reading this story and when i finished re-readin chapp 6 i saw u updated like right now and i was so happy i'm glad u finished the story keep writing cause i love your work mayeb i'll read another one of ur stories (if i know what they're about)

okay you are awesome cause u upd8ed continuye story cause i'm lovin it

Pari,

First off you have my condolences and I am very sorry for you and your family's lost. As far as the story it was nicely written usually I don't like "baby fics" I usually find them to be untrue to the characters but with "Everything Changes" I found myself able to actually hear the characters' voices specificaly Christina's and Bobbie's two of my favorite characters.

I really found the last paragraph of chapter six moving,

" He was so engrossed that she had watched him unaware for nearly an hour and a half before his eyes finally looked over and locked onto hers. When the huge smile spread across his face Christina was hit with such a profound revelation and an intense 'need' that compelled two words to fall from her lips without doubt or hesitation.

"Marry me," She asked softly."

Not only does it tie back into Cannon wonderfully its beautiful and romantic and just plain sweet. I look foward to finishing your story.

Again I am sorry for your loss and will pray for you and yours.

Soulcop83