Loved this story, it was so sweet!

Aw! Sweet and cute. I do that with clouds all the time when I'm bored.

Ah young love! how sweet. You captured the tow of them very well. They were playing an innocent game in the clouds but I could still see the emotions they had for each other, even if they didn't know it. This was beautiful I loved it.

First of all, I have to tell you I loved your title. It fits perfectly with your story and it's simply amazing. Also, I loved the innocence throughout the whole story and how much they obvioulsy care about one another 0) Awesome story.

Really cute! I liked it.

Wow, great piece! You've really perfected the art of using just enough words for the story, without it being overdone or underdone (if that makes sense). Teddy and Victoire seem very natural. Aw, I also just love how sweet the entire thing is; gave me the warm fuzzies inside in a good way! Excellent job!

I don't normally read Next Gen. stuff, and if I did, I wouldn't go out looking for something like TeddyVic, which is quite... canon, to say the least. But wow! This was spectacular, and very well written! It was so cute that my insides were melting. I haven't read a fic like this in a very long time, so thank you for it!

Aw, this was really cute! I love Teddy/Victoire, it's possibly my most favorite pairing of all, and you definitely did it justice here. I love the idea of them sitting out in the rain as kids, cloud-gazing. It just fits them, and you make it work so well :) This was just such a sweet fic!

Great job, and keep writing!

So cute! I must have said aww twenty times. It was absolutely adorable and perfectly described the innocence of children. I loved it!

The innocence of youth and the cuteness of friendship echoes throughout this story. That being said it's my first story with Victoire in it. The clouds bit is lovely and gave me a warm feeling inside. It reminds me of those lazy days when I’d stare at the sky and see animal shapes. Great writing.

xoxo

Noona

Ooh, this is so sweet!

The interaction between Teddy and Victoire is priceless, and immensely enjoyable.

As for the rain.. I've always hated using it for romance purposes, but I think you used it really well here.

Cute story, thanks for sharing!

Aww... How sweet *_* I really love Vic and Ted!

Awwww! Adorable!:D I love itxD too, too cute!

Great chapter.

This story was really cute and sweet, I love it very much. You're a fantastic writer! :] Zombie