*melts into a puddle of sad goo and goes off to search for a bucket to dribble into*

that was really sweet and cute! :D i love it (just mentioning how many times i thought about how i should comment on this story before realising i love the whole thing) the annual seasonal aspect is REALLY NICE and i like your use of description and stuff. Even contextual XD oh gosh i'm starting to sound like an English teacher.

okay... *ahem*

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA :3 LaviYu foreverness

P.S. Yes, I totally loved your story. _

Cough, yeah, really late getting around to reading these (damn RL).

LOVED IT!

And Lavi's is too.

***Cheeks referring to so is should be are.

Wordy and don't need "much":

He wants to touch especially much when Yu rolls off the bed in the hotel and his hair is disheveled and sticks a little to his back and shoulders because it's hot so you sweat when you sleep even if the window is open.

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He wants to touch especially when Yu rolls off the bed in the hotel: his hair is disheveled and sticks a little to his back and shoulders because you sweat from the heat when you sleep even if the window is open.

Hey there! Wow... have been long since I read a fic that I like so much to leave a review jejejeje you loose he habit, anyway, I like it a lot, was pretty nice and... well done, the way you put the seasons between his feelings... amazing. Hope to see more fics from you, about this couple or any other. Thanks for the lovely one-shot.

oh god, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cuute! when Lavi just blurted out "I can be your idiot?" I outright /squealed/. XD and then Kanda just saying "CHE!" was so funny, and still so cute... oh damn, I sound like a deranged 12-year-old fangirl, sorry XDD

I love this story !

Oh my god, I don't find words to say what your text made me feel. I have a huge smile in any case.

It is a very good idea of declining their love story according to seasons. Really.

Oh dear god. 3

Lol, animals reproducing. That's definitely a hidden secks hint thar, isn't it? Nice touch with the gorgeous creature part, haha. Tons of lovely, lovely interaction, and dear me I loved it to bits. (GARDEN? I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR.) The flying off the tower bit was so poetic yet somewhat sad. And generally... I JUST LOVED EVERYTHING. : D

Especially the way you entwined the four seasons that formed a single year into the actual timeline, because it makes it seem like all this actually did happen.

This is just awesome. Lovely, lovely fic there.