Like it. Like it a lot. I haven't seen many fics that deal with the wizard justice system, and you did a really good job painting it realistically.

Your style's also really easy to read - good grammar and spelling, nicely paragraphed, and a good mix of dialog and description. You've got a couple misplaced commas, but nothing a beta couldn't fix.

Aside from that, just one suggestion: don't put author's notes in the body of the text. They're distracting, and almost never necessary.

There is going to be another chapter, right? It's too good an opening to abandon.

This is good, continue, please!