That was great! I really liked it. You definitely should write more SPN fics!

Very intense...love the metaphor on both sides with the dream-game. :) I would like to know: is there a next?

The beginning is especially strong-gripping. Love what Dean defines as "easy": "he didn't even have to really be fully present." Fulfilling the letter of the promise instead of the spirit, and calling it good.

Can't wait to see more :)