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| Reviews for Twi to the Light |
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  love this story 9/3/11 . chapter 1 love this story can't wait to read more! |
 Alunabelle Night Shadow 1/28/11 . chapter 1Wowthis awesome, more please. |
| bookworm1234 11/27/10 . chapter 1 continue please, it was really good. |
| forevertwilighted 11/8/10 . chapter 1 i have read your other stories and you are amazing! i loooveee this story! i have always wondered what would happen if renesmee asked for Bella and edward's story! please make the next one! |
| Anonymous 8/7/10 . chapter 1 Great Story Please Continue!x |
| JennCorinthos 7/19/10 . chapter 1 Continue I want more... JENN |
| browneyedgirl238 7/14/10 . chapter 1 Great story! l loooove what you have so far. I've got two issues though... just constructive criticism... The first is that I think you change POVs too quickly. In my opinion, changing POVs too much kind of ruins the... flow of the story. The second is that I think you're copying too much from the book. If she doesn't remember that many details, then she shouldn't be quoting the details from the book word-for-word. Other than that, I luuurvvee the story(: Keep writinggg!(: |
| twilightlover4evr 7/9/10 . chapter 1 hell yes! plz continue! i love it and i hope more is coming. |
| crazychocochica17 7/9/10 . chapter 1 Yeah I like it but I'm scared that Renesmee will take it bad at the not so good parts so you have me on the edge of my seat! Update soon! |
| Jasper'sHarryFang 7/8/10 . chapter 1 yesshh fuckingg continue :) pleasee |
| maddie 7/8/10 . chapter 1 OH MY GOSH! yes please continue its AMAAAAAZING! i cant wait to read more1 update soon? |
| punkey.doodle.funky.noodle 7/8/10 . chapter 1 Oh wow! That's really good. I never thought of Twilight that way, more of a recording like the Kane Chronicles. |
