Cute little story:) It was a bit too fast paced, I didn't really have time to get into this world, but that's about the only thing I can think of. Good job:)

Emily

This is good but i wish there was more to the story like how they officially get together or something around those lines...like Harry accepting his magic again and meeting the coven

alskdjfsjf Would've been so happy if you continued this ;u;

Alas, you haven't (or at least... I don't think so /will go prod your profile page later ._.), but this was really awesome. xD; Harry just bursting out of the blue in a very Harry-esque manner about Carlisle being a vampire; I'm also curious still about the relationship between Carlisle and Esme now...? e_e

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Nice.

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Loved it! That last part left a juicy image in my head! ;D

Goddamnit! You should of definitely continued this! It was good!

So good.

Loved it!

liked it but it was too short. just think of the possibilities. how do the other cullens take it? does harry ever reveal his secret? will he(can he) return to being a wizard? and best of all, will he accept the change?

YES me likes it! its not easy to find a story for this type of pairing. So I cherish any story that I happen to stumble upon. I do hope you start another )

This is pretty good for a short one-shot! Of course, it has the potential to become longer, as there weren't really any small details. But as a one-shot most likely designed to get to the point, that's okay.

very good (: only wished it were longer!

XD luv it!