aren't this just brilliant?
I like your story very much! :D

and I'm glad you choose male hero because there's so little fic of him

That got a little close to the fourth wall, but I guess that is okay. Too much game script for me too. Interesting idea, but could have been executed better.

To be honest I also annoyed with that repeat again and bla bla bla... with many unfinished quest good story! I like the tragic ending!

Haha, this is brilliant!

I was thinking about the weirdness of the repeat the other day. This about sums it up. :D

Never thought about it...hmm...