Ew, its similar like the true story in campaign Archon of storms, but Myanee isnt a heiress (just a villager) right? And Bollvig come to Heiron to slay elyoses? So they never meet in abyss. But overall, its a good story.

Hello PauleenAnne,

There doesn't need to be a comma or a full stop after a question mark (?) or an exclamation mark (!). Think of the dot in the symbol as the full stop.

Please revise your chapter accordingly.